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I wasn't going to submit this one but the more I looked at it the more I liked it... Whatcha think?




If you like this there's mroe on my other account bazzlestock
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I wrote up a long critique and some comments on this, when I submitted it timed out :( and... it's all lost. So I'll try to remember what I wrote...

This piece as it is looks rather blurry. Resizing it to half the current size (so, I think it would end up as 760x570?) and then using a despeckle filter would make it appear sharper. Some of the detail would be lost but the overall effect would still be good. And a black frame perahps? =P

I love this piece because of the minimalisim in it! Beautiful in it's simplicity, and the tranquil feeling conveyed by the soft colours in the water work well to make it an astheticlly appealing piece. The log running parallel with the waves adds to the composition, making the feeling of harmony/tranquility greater.

All-in-all good angle, and good composition.

(If my critiques are too harsh, please let me know, however if you would like critiques on other works or want to point out a specific work to critique than don't hesitate to point me there :) )